Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Choklit Fires Comments

Rating: ★5.0

they took away my choklit fires
tormented touches, needless desires.
i told you, i told you that you would expire.
sugar tease, he can't please
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Ana Podarevska
sugar spooky kids
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Alison Cassidy 04 April 2007

Again, I feel the obsession with the occult in your work and yet this one has a more poetic delivery - more like the lyrics of a song. The rhymes work well and the repetition the 'I told you' line gives a pleasing shape to this darkly penned piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Ana Podarevska

Ana Podarevska

Kherson, Ukraine
Ana Podarevska
Ana Podarevska
Kherson, Ukraine
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