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Feeling everything like underwater air
when I can't understand why I need you

I paint seaweed tattoos as my breathing gets faster
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Maya Hanson
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 October 2016

Woah a love intrigue poem. The phrasing is strong n evocative which is what makes this poem interestin. U write in a superb style. Nice to read from u again. Pls do comment my latest poem too called, POETRY COMMENTARY......

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