Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Choir Of Coral Comments

Rating: 5.0

with sea breeze
waves gently delight
a calling for exotic dreams
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Michael Gale 23 June 2009

Greatly done. MJG... Of the world of poetry.

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Omar Ibrahim 28 May 2009

nice one! ! ! ! ! i really enjoied it..10++

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Surya . 25 May 2009

deep lines.very touching tribute.wonderfull.posted 10 surya

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Mimi Fakhira 24 May 2009

The lines themselves put a smile on my face... great work, sir! 10+++ MIMI

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rago rago 24 May 2009

a beautiful write and best dedication to a poet........always sea breeze makes exotice dreams.......

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Juan Carlos Abeti 23 May 2009

i just imagine myself in the beach, in the water, great job

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Eyan Desir 23 May 2009

Very sweet good write.................

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Luwi Habte 23 May 2009

i would love if your poems were in poem order some times it looks like talking, not a poem at all it is fine

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 22 May 2009

DEAR SIDDIQUI, Let me admit first I hav'nt read a poem of Linda Robson. But she must be good poet and of course I 'll.. it's a poem by some one who has got a great love for the sea. imageries used are good and cool. Thanks-Rajkumar

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Indira Renganathan 22 May 2009

This piece gives a beechy feeling of tranquility

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Indira Babbellapati 22 May 2009

i jsut had a drive along the beach...two distinct shades of gray-dark on the sea, light on the sky and a dazzling summer heat!

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Subbaraman N V 22 May 2009

Pleasant and sweet choir! Great write!

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fantastic lil poem. i liked the images..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 21 May 2009

I thought this poem wae very peaceful.(My two brothers were commercial divers.)

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Ravi A 21 May 2009

Very poetic. Instead of 'deep', 'depth'. Instead of 'sang', 'sung' (the past participle) . The last lines elevate the poem.

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Barry A. Lanier 21 May 2009

another imagetic persentation of your love of the sea...and one of the endangered species....an advocacy

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 May 2009

It is good that this poem is dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Lynda Robson

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Joseph Poewhit 21 May 2009

Nice - to bad the coral is dying from pollution.

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Naidz Ladia 21 May 2009

a sensitive poem with good expression...a nice work dear ahmad..naizz

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Roshni D'Souza 20 May 2009

Beautiful imagery and flow! Thanks, roshni.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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