with sea breeze
waves gently delight
a calling for exotic dreams
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The lines themselves put a smile on my face... great work, sir! 10+++ MIMI
a beautiful write and best dedication to a poet........always sea breeze makes exotice dreams.......
i would love if your poems were in poem order some times it looks like talking, not a poem at all it is fine
DEAR SIDDIQUI, Let me admit first I hav'nt read a poem of Linda Robson. But she must be good poet and of course I 'll.. it's a poem by some one who has got a great love for the sea. imageries used are good and cool. Thanks-Rajkumar
i jsut had a drive along the beach...two distinct shades of gray-dark on the sea, light on the sky and a dazzling summer heat!
I thought this poem wae very peaceful.(My two brothers were commercial divers.)
Very poetic. Instead of 'deep', 'depth'. Instead of 'sang', 'sung' (the past participle) . The last lines elevate the poem.
another imagetic persentation of your love of the sea...and one of the endangered species....an advocacy
It is good that this poem is dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Lynda Robson
a sensitive poem with good expression...a nice work dear ahmad..naizz
Greatly done. MJG... Of the world of poetry.