Saturday, September 12, 2009

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We came to this place riding on a sleigh made of our choices
We brought our children along for the ride
The world in which we exist was formed by those choices
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Shirley Hanley
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Rachel Ellard 09 November 2009

Wish someone would have told this to my parents. However, it still probably would not have helped. Your words mean very much to me. Great poem.

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Angel OfGod 24 October 2009

I pray many will read this and comprehend...very well done. I am a living travesty of this poem. May God forgive me.

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James Timothy Jarrett 04 October 2009

Shirley, Love it! Very deep and hidden but the meaning shows through

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