Monday, December 29, 2008

Choices Comments

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In the middle of right and wrong
I must stay clear, I must stay strong.

For I have lived here everyday.
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Sarah Sisson
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Ivor Hogg 15 January 2009

Your choice of rhyming couplets emphasises your message Of course Im prejudiced in favour of ryjmimg and metered verse

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Fay Slimm 03 January 2009

Relates the struggle of concience here Sarah and you have tackled the subject well - - very good verse......

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Ency Bearis 29 December 2008

A strong determination..we are free to choose..even seems fate is awry we must be strong with guts... powerful write...

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Salaam Freeland 29 December 2008

This is such a show of strength of mind and character. Taking responsibility; never falter; free to make choice. Thanks for sharing.

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Fiona Davidson 29 December 2008

Sometimes you don't need to make the choice Sarah they choose for you...God may give us choices but the choices can take over...good strong write...thanks for sharing it...Fi

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