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Should I simply end my life?
Would save you all a load of pain
With the dragging of a knife
Deep across my bloody vein
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Choices...we all have..perhaps thts the pain...really diifrent poem tht i have ever read..but i always wanted to write somethinh like this....keep it up man..
I like this suicide piece. There remains, however, an open end... as if something more needs to be said.
The stark contrast of such beautiful words so beautifully placed about so ugly a subject. Fascinating.
It is a bit D&G today, I just posted something on death, yours is much more vivid though, Well written, All the best David
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7/27/2025 4:01:02 PM # 1.0.0
Good work again, although I hope that you don't do what you are discribing in this poem, otherwise we would lose a great talent. And don't let your poetry be limited by your name...