Monday, January 22, 2018

Choices Comments

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I have an option,
But, can I take action?
Am torn between two choices,
Which aren't easy bushes,
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Hamzat Mariam
COMMENTS
Victor 26 January 2018

I love dis....keep it up....sky is ur starting point....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2018

A beautiful poem, short and sweet! The first two lines ask a million questions in a question…Wonderful! You may like to read my poem ‘Ode to My Conscience’. Thank you!

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Hamzat. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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