Saturday, July 14, 2012

Choices Comments

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A faraway voice
in the back of my mind
telling me what is right
telling me what is wrong
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Dave Alan Walker
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Kevin Patrick 05 August 2012

Sometimes we need that voice to shine a light then one day we may just get it right My problem is I am always unsure of which way I should go, its nice to have guiding lights, but in the end its always my choice

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Captain Cur 25 July 2012

I follow it when I write for good or bad. Strong thinking man's poem.

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Shai Cherry 23 July 2012

nice poem it's a mind thinker

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Heather Wilson 14 July 2012

We often never know until it`s too late if we have made the wrong chioce, (I`ve made many) a good thought here.

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Eric Cockrell 14 July 2012

every moment is a choice... do we dare live?

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Hana K 14 July 2012

A simple fact that's almost always forgotten A nice read, thank you

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Valerie Dohren 14 July 2012

Sometimes we get it right, sometimes not, that's being human - no-one's perfect. You can please some of the people some of the time, but not all of the people all of the time it is said. Great little write.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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