Choices Poem by Malcolm Simms

Choices

Rating: 5.0


Do you see what I see, or do you refuse,
the overall outcome, is how you choose,
you can become a saint, or continue a sinner,
give up and loose or fight as a winner,
through out life much is done by force,
but the strongest one, is when you make that choice.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babalola Adeola 03 August 2011

wow! You have said it all. Nothing comes easy or when we fold our arms and do nothing. Tell them more. Tell the world. They need to know.

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Unwritten Soul 01 August 2011

Choices could be two or more but to choose one is hard to do sometimes...As we sometimes blur with indistinguishably sight to see what the best what's not..I see the way you write here to let us share a thought how could we can make a good choice we got no clue about future but we have few hints from the past...I ran toward the light or live in dark..i cant live in both but they can coexist but impossible to take both road by one body...Nice write Malcom, it short but long thought... :) _Unwritten Soul

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Romeo Della Valle 01 August 2011

This powerful and thought provoking write has become your stepping stone into the Poetry World! This strong write shows your great talent which you should develop through time well spent reading and writing (Other fellow poets' works) enhancing your writing skills and reflecting your potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Malcolm Simms

Malcolm Simms

Austin Texas
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