Friday, June 7, 2013

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Rating: 4.8

'Henry, is it not time you should propose? '
'Propose what? ' He gulped a sweet chocolate.
'Marriage of course! ' Intrigued, he struck a pose.
'What? For a bachelor, it is too late! '
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Imelda Ortega Suzara
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Chinedu Dike 05 November 2014

I like the uniqueness of the piece, well articulated and written with insight to drive home the poet's conviction. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Doug Bentley 26 June 2013

You have managed to create your own form and pattern within a well-known format. Pleasure to read!

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Gajanan Mishra 07 June 2013

very good write, I enjoyed it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Imelda Ortega Suzara

Imelda Ortega Suzara

Manila, Philippines
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