Monday, September 12, 2011

Choice Comments

Rating: 5.0

One hand is the emotion, that I left in the past,
The other holding on to pressure
As the future creeps up fast.
Past actions made me wonder
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Raziel Baptiste
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Romeo Della Valle 12 September 2011

Wow! What a powerful and touching romantic write! Bravo! Raziel! Many times we have to make A PAINFUL CHOICE (posted poem) between one thing or the other but only time will have the final word about our choice! We must move one and break the chain that keep us tied to the past once and for all! 10+++ Great write! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Raziel Baptiste

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