Monday, May 7, 2012

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The cold sighed around your doorway
Yet your words warmer than before
I stand barren outside
like the waiting door
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Simon Collins
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Captain Cur 09 May 2012

Very nicely written about when two ships must part. I liked the word choices, they combined well in a poem about separation.

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