Choice Poem by Sathya Narayana

Choice

Rating: 5.0


Some wake up sharp by the daybreak;
take a bath; wear ashes or tilak
liberally on their foreheads and bodies;
before their deities burn incense,
light an oil wick
and join the world
...ah to swindle, squeeze and abuse the weak.

Some awake late by eight or nine
after a seesawed night of spilled over wine
and go out to help the maimed,
unfed, oppressed and distressed.

If one asks me to make a wise choice
I don't mind siding with the sinful looking latter
...in spite of the God-factor with the sinister former!

Monday, November 23, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: god,sin
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 03 December 2009

very meaningful.... its not what we want to show the world but what's inside our hearts I can have my own choice... I can be like a Pharisee, Scribe, Publican, Sadducee (as what is stated in the Bible...) or I can be like that old-poor woman so meek.... you write with great concept Sir....very significant... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Kesav Easwaran 01 December 2009

real god-factor is with the latter type of people you paint...the former type are only god-flatterers meaningful poem...you bring out your theme very well there...10

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Sandra Martyres 25 November 2009

Your Choice is the right one Sathya.... never be taken in by sanctimonious looks - especially when you know the true person behind them.

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Seema Chowdhury 24 November 2009

yes there are all sorts of people doing all sorts of things. its difficult to know who will be a sinner and who will be a winner. thanks for sharing.

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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