Monday, March 17, 2008

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I have got bruises all over
I’ve felt this pain for so long that sometimes it does not hurt anymore
I longed for things which now do not matter
I cried for broken dreams which were easily replaceable
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Anjali Mandokhot 17 March 2008

very strong and full of emotions and how frankly u all is admitted...hurt yet not blaming nyone i liked the attitude of this poem wishes anjali

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Chhavi Anupam 17 March 2008

very touching senstivity creates hurt but then how can poets be devoid of that...that is in the personality. People you trusted were not worth trusting....pain is why did you trust at all....Superb Chhavi anupam

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