Wednesday, January 6, 2016

Choice Comments

Rating: 4.9

I was free to choose my path
Free to go this way or that
I had this gift since my birth
To make or break what came my way
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 January 2023

A wasted gift? No. Gifts would continue to come your way by His Grace. A sincere introspection

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 January 2023

i really loved this poem Bravo Top 5 kudos

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 January 2023

I felt like revisiting this excellent poem. Appreciated your expression, 'Sometimes my heart longed to tread the ground untouched by human feet to leave my marks on its virgin soil but fear tugged at my heart '. God bless you dear poetess!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2019

If I would be asked to pick best five lines of this wonderful poem I would certainly chose first three lines and the last two lines! This is really a brilliant poem that expresses your heart......A beautiful poem....10

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So true my friend! Choices are the stuff of which life is made yet fear sometime keep us from choosing what is best.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

Fear and tear! But, be positive with your mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Having freedom to choose path is very nice and interesting. You have finely drafted and shared this poem here.10

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M Asim Nehal 06 January 2016

Freedom to choose our way is nicely expressed in this poem, , , , I liked it, ..10

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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