I was free to choose my path
Free to go this way or that
I had this gift since my birth
To make or break what came my way
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I felt like revisiting this excellent poem. Appreciated your expression, 'Sometimes my heart longed to tread the ground untouched by human feet to leave my marks on its virgin soil but fear tugged at my heart '. God bless you dear poetess!
If I would be asked to pick best five lines of this wonderful poem I would certainly chose first three lines and the last two lines! This is really a brilliant poem that expresses your heart......A beautiful poem....10
So true my friend! Choices are the stuff of which life is made yet fear sometime keep us from choosing what is best.
Fear and tear! But, be positive with your mind. Thanks for sharing.
Having freedom to choose path is very nice and interesting. You have finely drafted and shared this poem here.10
Freedom to choose our way is nicely expressed in this poem, , , , I liked it, ..10
A wasted gift? No. Gifts would continue to come your way by His Grace. A sincere introspection