Sunday, December 13, 2015

Chod Aya Main Maa.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tum kahan ho maa
Mujhe tumhari bahut yaad ati hai maa
Tum bin sab bikhra hai maa
Meri kitabain mere bikhre kapde
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abhilasha bhatt
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Souren Mondal 01 March 2016

'Tum gain To maine palat kar us ghr ko nhi dekha Us sheher ko nhi dekha Un rishton ko nhi dekha Jo wajh thi tumhe khodene ki...' These lines are extremely poignant Abhilasha.. This is a very moving poem, but just these last few lines nearly bring a little twist to the poem... Why does he say that the REASON that he lost his mother is the home, the city, and the relationships that he had had in the past? ? ? There is a lot more than what meets the eyes in this poem Abhilasha.. I think, this one is amongst the five best poems of yours that I have read.. I am amazed how all of us, who consider ourselves readers of your poetry have missed out in this gem.. Wonderfully written.. A 10/10 from me.. Thanks for sharing.

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