Friday, October 21, 2005

Chocolates On The Floor Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't want to talk to you any more
because you threw the chocolates on the floor
You should really apologize
You won't, you animalize
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David Darbyshire
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Bri Edwards 26 June 2017

now, from MyPoemList, i put this into my/our July 2017's 'showcase for and by PH poets'. Thanks. maybe you will get some new readers? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 10 February 2013

short and SWEET. i like it! any poem that makes me laugh (this on at the ending) must be good. well, it might not be good according to some people, but it's good enough for me. add to mypoemlist now. thanks for sharing. any recent poems for us? it looks like you'be left us. hope you didn't die or something that would be troublesome for you. bri

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