Saturday, May 28, 2016

Chocolates Comments

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Chocolates
Red roses, violets blue,
here is a box of chocolates,
just for you.
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Susan Williams 09 June 2016

Wow! ! ! ! I being a chocoholic was merrily imagining eating up that luscious confection.... and you changed direction on a dime and nearly broke my neck! ! ! Your poem was rather seductive in both directions, but I am a wee bit put out- - there is no chocolate in the house. Well-written, my friend.

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