Thursday, May 7, 2009

Chocolate Hills Comments

Rating: 4.3

A young bird sat on tree branch,
looks here and there,
as if nothing to do
Confused whether to scream
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Noel Horlanda
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Shashendra Amalshan 18 October 2009

Reading this poem was a delicious and exhilarating experience.. Very nice composition indeed.. Well Done sir 10 regards Shan

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Meggie Gultiano 31 August 2009

beautiful tribute to our Chocolate hills where my ancestors live. I am very proud of you.., too

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 July 2009

Hey, this poem is good. I wish that someday, I could see the chocolate hills not just because it is a wonder but because it is in the Philippines!

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Obinna Eruchie 29 May 2009

a lovely poem on a young falcon fascinated by the sight of beautiful hills of brown soil.

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Surya . 15 May 2009

wonderfull imagination and write, posted 10 surya

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Melvin Banggollay 14 May 2009

This is a vivid description of nature's wonder. I can see between the lines how beauty was embroidered in bohol's famous chocolait hills where I once visited way back in 1998 during our national convention. I made a poem too about this nature's wonder. thnaks, melvin

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Nooruddeen Mm 13 May 2009

Dear Noel I have no confusion, I will fly with you to the chocolate hills and I want to reach there before they melt down. Will you take me with you pls….? Fine.

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Anjali Sinha 10 May 2009

chocolate hills wowwwwww simply awesome! ! ! excellent write -10 anjali

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Rommel Mark Marchan 08 May 2009

mud thrown by mighty titans ok pod imoha bai oy different poet diferent stroke importante wa pa na kaon choco hills if ma kain na yun wa na tayo gawin choco poems ten ka bai

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Sandhya S N 08 May 2009

Dear You made me dream about the choclate hills regards Sandhya

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Joseph Poewhit 07 May 2009

Paints a very beautiful picture.

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Catrina Heart 07 May 2009

Magnificent tribute to the Chocolate Hills.............10+++

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rago rago 07 May 2009

enjoyable and pleasing write........... the turning golden leaf, of the ten worlds wonders, the chocolate hills.......... fantastic to read....... thank you for your kind sharing.

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