Chocolate (Haiku) Comments

You have great talent and it has showed in this poem

Yummy..... :) Can I please have some lol

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Alex, succinct and as tasty as a Mars bar!

what i like about haiku is that we are like reading the shortest pocket book ever! ^_^ thanks for sharing!

no more once eaten....the end is so thoughtful every thing got its end relish ur chocolates slowly! its finished bt it fills us with a pleasant feeling wishes anjali

Lovely! As sweet as chocolates!