Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Chocolate Drop Comments

Rating: 5.0

Firm yet soft to the touch,
My chocolate drop brings water to my lips,
I relish the thought of tasting her dainty body,
She is aptly shaped like a nipple to ease my suckle,
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Nora Pendaeli
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 16 July 2013

delicious this poem, far more than the subject itself! inked it well, poet.

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Dave Walker 16 July 2013

A great open, like it.

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Nora Pendaeli

Nora Pendaeli

Dar es Salaam Tanzania
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