Chocolate Cake Comments

Absolutely delicious poem! Mr Rosen is a celebreated childrens writer, and I have to say his perspective beutifully encaptulates the childs world. I wish I could have written this!

How chocolatey sweet, plus a real poetic treat! Enjoyed, thank you very much.

What a delicious chocolate cake!

A cautionary tale for kids, yes, but hardly a poem worthy of the term...

AND...'1 just take any old slice at it' And one more '1'. Do you see it? This is not much of a poem, BUT it IS done well, whatever one calls it. AND chocolate cake, with yummy chocolate frosting, IS almost irresistible!

'1 thought of.' OR 'I thought of.'? I bet 'I', not '1'. : )

A short story turned into an interesting narrative poem...superb

Good poem hehe

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I needed to do a presentation about this poem and i feel norvous what should I do....😪😪

A magnificent poem! I have already voted and taken it to my favourite!

I have read this poem before. Have voted with full marks. Chocolate Cake is always a delight! A revisit to enjoy the delicious chocolate poem once again.

A wonderful poem brilliantly crafted. Very entertaining.

Wowstatic🤩! ! ! Loved the poem ❤

A highly entertaining poem!

being chosen as The Classic Poem Of The Day. Most deserving honour.

to carefully open the fridge, first a small bite on the crumbs and then step by step the whole chocolate cake to eat! Really vividly told, I enjoyed it so much! Good poem, masterfully told! Congratulations

2) to carefully open the fridge, first a small bite on the crumbs and then step by step the whole chocolate cake to eat! Really vividly told, I enjoyed it so much! Good poem, masterfully told! Congratulations being chosen as The Classic Poem Of The Day. Most deserving honour.

1) So simply worded, yet very impressive and so passionately told, how adventurous was the overnight journey past his parents' bedroom and the pieces Lego,