Chocolate cake,
Peacefully baked,
Chocolate dripping down from the cake,
Oh! My life at stake,
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peacefully is strange for a cake being baked you may want to change it with another adverb...but it's a wonderful poem made me hungry though i have just finished eating! i found the rhyme musical here...great job keep writing and give me a piece of your cake!
Yummy Yummy…wow...you’ll enjoy alone? 1st bite for me dear…LOL! 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Sounds yummy to me... the poem taste fine thank you