Thursday, July 23, 2009

Chocolate And Vanilla, Nice Dream Comments

Rating: 4.6

A beautiful Sunday afternoon
Amid the estival breeze of a silent moon
You and I did enjoy a few scoops
Of our favorite dessert; oops, oops
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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2017

The is sheer romance in its most sublime. Exquisite! Elegant! Seductive! Beautiful! ... Remain blessed.

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Dwi Utami 12 July 2010

He.he.he: p good creation of you, : 10x10=100% point for you.

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Lucas Akkadian 19 September 2009

You created a very warm, inviting atmosphere, and a smooth style of words with this write. Nicely done

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Chamekka Jones 18 September 2009

OHHH! LA! LA! I CAN TASTE IT! =D

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Christopher Montalvo 23 August 2009

I really love this poem, could never have one without the other,10/10! Another favorite added to my list

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Aubrey silver 22 August 2009

this is a great poem as are the rest you had asked me to read so keep writhing this way it will make a wonderfull poem your mind

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Subham Dutta 20 August 2009

It is realy good poem.

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Ida Mustazir 14 August 2009

So cute and tasty atmosphere.

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Life Poem 12 August 2009

Oh how very cute and how many people can relate to. Two nice things are one delicious ice cream sundae.! I'd love it if you read my poem Healthy, just the opposite.

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Jayram Daya 12 August 2009

Togetherness is sharing the two. Two became one and so was all that was related. Chocolate and vanilla is the two with the lick of one you would want the other. Very well written. I enjoyed the beginning the middle and the end.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 11 August 2009

I enjoyed this very delicious poem...inviting descriptions of chocolate and vanilla.

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Nihar ... 09 August 2009

wow what a beautiful description.... i just loved it..... superb

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Bong Francisco 08 August 2009

I read all the comments. Same feeling. Deliciously created.

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 08 August 2009

Excellent write. Enjoyable.

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Michelle Kafka 07 August 2009

What a lovely yet powerful read. Excellent contrast. This poem made me smile also. Thanks for sharing.

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Adeiza A. 07 August 2009

This love's truly powerful. I see it attracts even the pride of the night (Moon) while it's yet day! This is cool.

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Cheung Shun Sang 07 August 2009

Sum up it is good to serve chocolate with vanilia or serve vanila with chocolate. O had a poem Chilli compass cracker o do reminber where o put it. May be latter i bring it out again. It is about newer term in worlds of mixtures

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Cheung Shun Sang 07 August 2009

DReams are very good to have chocoilate serve with vanila

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Bele Lele 06 August 2009

This poem made me smile, keep it up!

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Terentia Chapple 04 August 2009

Ha, oka den..This is great and full of passion!

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