Saturday, September 27, 2008

Chocolate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Holding dad's little finger,
I eyed the colourful covers.
Permission granted to choose,
There! I was DAZED! ! !
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Raihana Abdul Jabbar
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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

so sweet like chocolate melts and enters my heart wonderful write great :)

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Ken E Hall 17 August 2011

Just what dads are for spoiling you and chocolate that dreamy cream, nice poem to read...regards

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Ken E Hall 17 August 2011

Just what dads are for spoiling you and chocolate that dreamy cream, nice poem to read...regards

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

Chacolatteeee; fully flavoured; delightful; poem. I too love chacolates........

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