Chocking On Tears And Pain Comments

That's so deep, and heavy. Quite remarkably expressed though. You may think you are not strong, but sometimes being alone takes the most strenght of all, even though I know it's absolutely awful. It also takes strength to write about it, so kudos there. Great poem.

There is a curious grammatical change in the middle which makes the speaker start describing it in the third person. Other than that, it is a really descriptive piece. Worthy of reading more than once. GW62

expressive write.. tears fall from words and lines... excellently penned Rema

Very good, filed with alot of emotion and sadness, however look at your spelling when using the word to, as in describing a word, too should be used always..... Bonnie