Chitchat Under 20 Comments

Very Simple, excellent, good flow... Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

Sweetheart Your writing is more refined.. I love this cheers. The Sage

smart girl eh.. nice poetry

Yay! ! ! ! ! ! ! .......I love this master piece a loooooooooot....I hope you can see mine :)

simple poem with tender words.Keep this up and you'll be g8er than WILLIAM himself.

it's wonderful! &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&i loved it so

i want to chit chat so so bad even we have not met but no sweat the thril is all I want, you bet

bravo! ! nice creative/innovative effort! loved it! 10+

nice rhymes and beautiful poem.................a good write..........

nice poem...creative...and interesting and really really meaningfull :) ...great work for you both! !

A beautiful chat, well -penned and creative. Keep up the good work.

an ambitious poem. there are facts and suppositions. a nice idea and good content. I likek the mention of 'Khofo' you imprint an Egyptian look. keep it up! 10 for your chitchat under 20

very good and very well penned!

That's a beautiful poem, very creative...well versed.

very well written.. keep on writing u hve the ability.ma wishes r always with u' god bless u

poetically great, an interesting chat laced with a truth!

A good poem...and i want to say that me too..' All what I need is some peace and joy'...10 for you both Merna.

interesting fantasy write....very good presentation into poetic way....10

Beautiful imagination. Cute discussion. Nice to read. Liked a lot.

interesting chat..practical too..very good to read...thanks