Chirping Comments

I stared blankly at the screen after reading this...kind of blown away. I think Scotty sums it up nicely in his comment so I'll shut up. Great read.

I think what I like most about your stuff is we(the reader) never go where we think we're going. I always think I got a hold on what the poem is going to do, and then it drops off the edge of the table and lands in my lap. Love the second person narration too. I think second person point of view works really well in poetry.