Sunday, March 10, 2013

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At the ripe old age of 4.
She stands there at the door.
Carebear suitcase packed and ready.
Dora fruit snacks and her teddy.
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Little King of Sorrows
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..... W@king Up..... 21 April 2013

lol this is a great poem :) a way to get children to do stuff is a trade (well, the sensible versions bribe) . But great, this is a brilliant poem :) -w

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Crystal Hipp 11 March 2013

Spot on lol, couldn't said it better, that's very true

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