Sunday, May 20, 2012

Chipmunks Confusion Comments

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Chipmunk
Tail held high
Sprints across the street
On the fly -
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Smoky Hoss
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Heather Wilson 03 June 2012

A great write, Poor chipmunk never quite making it, I guess they were there before roads that are no use to them.

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Kevin Patrick 01 June 2012

I've always loved chipmunks and squirrels, there real underdogs for working class heros.

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Dave Walker 28 May 2012

A great poem, like it, my attention span is about the same, a great write.

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Captain Cur 23 May 2012

He crossed that road because we put it in his way. I call on all chipmunks to rebel and have their day! Nuts!

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Eric Cockrell 22 May 2012

sounds like the story of my life!

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Valerie Dohren 21 May 2012

Same reason as the chicken - to get to the other side! Seriously, this poem suggests that we expend a great deal of time and energy looking for the treasures we already possess if we did but realize. Good one.

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