Friday, April 3, 2015

Chinese New Year's Eve In Hangzhou Comments

Rating: 4.5

Today
As I sit
Under the locust tree
I recall that yesterday
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Raymond Farrell
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Yiyan Han 05 January 2018

Well because you are an outsider...A strange mixture of loneliness and melancholy...wonder why... ;)

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Raymond Farrell 05 January 2018

I made it clear why It's their New Year not mine which makes the emotions understandable under the circumstances.

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Eugene Levich 13 April 2015

A lovely poem with an interesting Chinese touch to it- a scene introduced and an emotion that it evoked.

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Raymond Farrell 13 April 2015

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Mj Lemon 04 April 2015

To be so completely surrounded by something, and yet not having that sense of belonging. This is a fantastic poem...A 10

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Raymond Farrell 05 April 2015

Thank you for your comment. I am glad you grasped what I was driving at.

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