Saturday, October 4, 2008

China White Comments

Rating: 5.0

So lost in the sound of her voice I don’t hear the words

she scatters black and white on the table in picture and verse
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Lewis Marrow
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Jason Taylor 18 November 2008

She was clawing at my buttons and zips to get to my heart And I press a closing eye to her lips as the powder restarts thats a real good line.and the first line is so sweet and nice too. i like this because its got a lot soul in it personaly i think its the best thing you have wrote. a 10 from me great poem. you really should write lots more.

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