China Doll Comments

Oozing heartache and regret etched into your heart and soul you still live for the dreams you had of the future with your beloved, very creative and beautifully written Leah!

This poetry expresses the pure sorrow, the pure disappointment, in the situation. That is an achievement of genuine merit, but not the achievement originally desired by the speaker in the poem. One would not willingly endure such a thing in order to merely capture its eventual despair in great poetry. 'O all the sacred wisdom of the earth rests upon her soft lips and in her eyes' (Kenneth Patchen)