Sunday, January 1, 2006

China Clouds Comments

Rating: 4.8

Picturesque sky sun-soaked fields
Fragile china clouds protect and shield
Flaxen yellow sunflower seeds yield
Nourishing rainstorms a tempest wields
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Carole Cookie Arnold
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Joy Vanderhelm 02 January 2006

Strong work. Sometimes, when using rhyme, things can sound forced, but this is quite good.

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Ernestine Northover 01 January 2006

Uuuuummmmmhhhhhh! ! ! A lovely piece of writing here, a lovely read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Carole Cookie Arnold

Carole Cookie Arnold

Ft. Lauderdale Florida
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