Romeo a handsome youth
Who carries a rickety ladder door to door
And clean the soot properly.
When smoke rises up to the sky
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very cool poem indeed aiyya, .... you write most entertaining, fun poems indeed.. this is good... I like your narrative ones.. lovesss shan
An enchanting fairy tale. I approve of the chimney sweep who watches the smoke until it disappers into infinity. 10/10 for your modern Romero and Juliet. Always your friend, Sandra
You don't have to be a Capulet or a Montague to suffer the pangs and arrows of 'true love'. A sweet and sour tale of love and hard work. Your poems smiles upon the reader. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥