Chilika- A Poem In Odia Language Comments

Nice description of Chilika lake with sad ending.

Badhiya odiya gitati Madam.Apananka kabitati bahuta bhala lagila.

Many readers wanted a translation of this poem.I have translated the poem into English honoring their request.Kindly read the poem and give your valuable opinion.

A great hot poem in Odia language is well penned as a tribute to Chilika Lake. We appreciate your effort of penning such great poem with brilliant mind and natural perception. An excellent sharing is done really

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I translated and read this wonderful poem, Though the translated versions are not 100% accurate yet it gave me a great feeling of the place you described.

I can't express the beauty of Chilika the way the great Radhanath had once expressed! Time has transformed its shape, size and ambience! Your poetic eyes have meticulously comprehend the scenario.. beautifully written! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful poem! !

Top stars for this lovely Poetess Bharati and her beautiful poem Chilika.

Dear Bharati, So happy to see your poem as the hot poem of the day. Chilika is a beautiful lagoon is Odisha state. I would love to read this poem in English as well.

I have already taken this wonderful poem to MyPoemList...! My great pleasure reading this poem time and again! !

I have the great poet Radhananath's Chilika...marala malini nilambu chilka! I have not read such a great modern poem on chilika with vivid deception of deterioration of its beauty.. Great attempt!

Sorry i could not read. It seems it's a beautiful poem. Great admirations.

I can't read Odia but I have stayed at INS Chilika (land establishment of Indian Navy) and I loved my stay at that place. Thanks for sharing.

ତୁ ପ୍ରିତୀମୟୀ ମାତୃ ମୟୀ ଚିଲିକା ତୋ ମମତାର ଡୋରିରେ ଦିନେ ଟାଣି ଆଣି ଥିଲୁ ପରମ ଆରାଧ୍ୟ ପ୍ରଭୁ ଜଗନ୍ନାଥ ଙ୍କୁ ଯବନ ଡରରେ ଦିନେ ଆସି ଆଶ୍ରା ଲୋଡ଼ିଥିଲେ ତୋ କୋଳରେ l..............ମାତୃମୟୀ ଚିଲିକାର ମମତାପୂର୍ଣ୍ଣ ହୃଦୟର ବର୍ଣ୍ଣନା ଅତ୍ୟନ୍ତ ମନମୁଗ୍ଧକର। ଖୁବ ସୁନ୍ଦର କବିତାଟିଏ ଫୁଟି ଉଠିଛି ଆପଣଙ୍କ କଲମ ମୁନରେ.। ଦ୍ଵିତୀୟ ଥର ପାଇଁ ଏ କବିତା ପଠନ କଲି। ଧନ୍ୟବାଦ । (So beautiful, I made second visit for its special attraction. Thanks again.)

Very nice.tuching my heart.

ଆଜି ତୋ ଉପରେ ଚିଙ୍ଗୁଡ଼ି ଘେରି ର ରାଜ ବାଲିରେ ପୋତିହୋଇ ଯାଏ ତୋର ଛାତି ତୋ ଦେହରେ ନୌବାଣିଜ୍ୟର ଇତିହାସ ଲେଖିଥିବା ଓଡ଼ିଆ ଜାତି......you have expressed the real scenario of Chillika today! A very pragmatic write!

ଦୂରୁଁ ଦୃଶ୍ୟମାନ ପାରିକୁଦ, ମାଲୁଦ ସନ୍ଧ୍ୟା ନଇଁଗଲାପରେ ମାମୁ ଭଣଜା ପାହାଡର ନୀଳ ନୀଳ ରୂପ your poem is so fantastic 10++++++

Chamatkara barnana hoichhi. Chilikaku mara sambodhanre hrudayasparshi amlana premara nidarshana anajaichhi.Mahashaya, apananka lekhara saili uchchakotira hoichhi. E gitatiku mu khub pasanda kali. Dhanyabad. ...10

Ok Bharati, I Shall Wait....

But about Chilika Lake I have heard a lot.