Thursday, February 23, 2012

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I was sitting on a bench

while in a nearby mall,
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anisha sipporah
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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 29 February 2012

wow! ! ! i wondered while reading. great poem with nice meaning)

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Afolabi Boluwatife 'muyiwa 23 February 2012

Waoh....I love your poem...Beautifully crafted...But try and work on your rhymes though...kudos...

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Afolabi Boluwatife 'muyiwa 23 February 2012

Beautifully crafted...I love it...but try and improve on your rhymes...kudos

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Afolabi Boluwatife 'muyiwa 23 February 2012

Waoh....I love your poem...Beautifully crafted...But try and work on your rhymes though...kudos...

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 February 2012

Enjoyed the truth of your poem. Good..Lovely! ! !

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