Thursday, August 16, 2012

Childs Play Comments

Rating: 5.0

Streams full and rushing
Young boy splashing
Wellies wet, dashing
Water lapping,
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Robert Green
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Walterrean Salley 18 November 2012

Fun! Fun! A vivid picture of fond memories, etched in time. So lovely and endearing. Really enjoyed.

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Persian Khushi 14 October 2012

this a sweet write... ddnt we all do this at one time? :)

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Hans Vr 31 August 2012

Very lovely and lively description of the child's play. Excellent poem

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Shahzia Batool 18 August 2012

photographic depiction of boyhood...!

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

Enchanting indeed - good one Robert.

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