Children Song Comments

WELL WRITTEN. U GET 10++++++++++...........

Birds have wings and human have cells. very high

You are really writing and i love that.Thanks for sharing this poem with us to learn from as well. Edward Kofi Louis.

delightful images and scenes, very playful, and lyrical

Very Beautiful So many memories are brought back with this one. Thanks for sharing -Brie

What a lovely song! univeral in appeal to the child in each one of us

this is great. i particularly love the last stanza. Thanks for sharing

I liked the line /usage: ' when demons giggle' good

A well written poem.thanks for sharing.

I can see this set to music for children to sing, well done my friend, 10 Lynda xx

amusing and pretty.......................

It is simple and easy for the children to sing this song.

Wonderfull work of art this is.

wonderful poem for children!

Little demons they are. You captured them well

Ohh my, children will definirely love this song.Well done Ahmad.

lovely song- children have innocence. the last stanza is beautiful.10 Mamta

The soothing light from the face of glowing innocence spills in golden cascades! ! ! this poem is as beutiful as a dream!

I read it. a beautified poem

wow! It's fine composition! The style of expression nice.......10+