Friday, December 9, 2016

Children's Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Children's smile costs more than diamond,
Children's smile beautiful than rose bud.

Children's heart as cool as moon,
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sakalabaktula sairaj
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2019

The photograph you added is of such purity, look at the eyes of the children. Beautiful photograph taken and added here. Thank you, dear teacher!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2019

I cite here two lines of your lovely worded poem, absolutely thought provoking and the most important message is truly correct, children are the promise of tomorrow. Here are your lines I cited: We should avoid child labor, If not our nation can't grow never and ever...........................Indeed, so truest! You have done your task as a good poet: you have brought the precious and most important message to the surface.Excellent poem! A 10++++++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2017

Nice poem... good back and new theme ground...10 There is no ill feeling in his or her mind That we can easily make or find She or he has whole of the world at his feet And smiles always to greet

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