Children's Day Comments

PART TWO: IF not resolved by your smart mind as a gift from the Almighty! Just like creating a poem, you must think of the words and make up your mind to choose. So is life too, dear Poet. BUT I appreciate your true honesty as the most valuable part of your character. Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant poem. A 10 and myriads more for the vote.

PART ONE: Ah, scared to live as an? You wanna bury your head in the sand? No dear Poet, real life is frightening ar some times, but we must move on in society, we have our duty, you as a man and I as a woman. There are only problems in your life

We often recall the memories of childhood inspite of several work in helter-skelter like... Having mothers care Slipping here and there ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Song of parrots Barking of dogs Cry of jackdaws Bless of elephants Menace of monkeys Swim of ducks It is really a beautiful poem with amusing depiction on account of 'Children's Day'. Thank u dear Vijoy for sharing this lovely poem.10

Every event which runs in time Seems to be so adventurous Song of parrots Barking of dogs Cry of jackdaws Bless of elephants A wonderful poem with some vivid images of fun-filled childhood days.Children are innocent and carefree.Every small thing or animal around them are like big wonders.But how quickly days pass! With time worries, work pressure and responsibilities replace pure joy that we felt as children.How we wish to go back in time to our childhood days! !

A poem of life; I liked it. It sounds good. Thanks for sharing it.

A beautiful poem with so many lovely imageries on childhood. Loved the very essence of the poem. Will read it many times more. 10++++ for the sharing. Regards. Subhas

wonderful vijay sai.. i appreciate you