Tuesday, August 25, 2009

: : : : ~~~ Children Of Tomorrow ~~~: : : : Comments

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We, our plans, in yesteryear
Unknowing real decisions,
Consequences –lead-
We who came before you,
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Ernestine Northover 31 August 2009

A wonderful poem so well stated. You have woven this one with great skill, putting the point across with expertise. If only one could believe that something like this could happen. We all learn by our mistakes only by then it is too late, sadly. But I never give up hope. You are still the tops! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Uriah Hamilton 29 August 2009

The power of love to make us the children of hope. Love will bring us to a new child-like dawn. Thanks for the write.

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Andrew Blakemore 28 August 2009

The children are the future and if they don't learn from our mistakes then there is no hope for the world. Wonderful poetry Duncan, you are a star. Best wishes, Andrew

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