Children Of The Night Comments

I've taken time to think and ponder on this masterpiece. I think you just asked the deep question of life: who hears the screams of the children of the night? . Thanks boss

Hello... I just placed a review and it disappeared but I just basically said how this was a moment for deep breaths and thoughts... I also said I was going to sit and think for a few moments and re-read this piece. Thanks again Karen

This is a real... Deep breath, thought moments....out of respect for them little souls I am going to take time out for a few quiet moments and re-read Thanks dave. Karen

wow..intense who will lead them to the path of rightousness who will enlighten their path with love. Dave You are too much

Dave, Love your writing. I love the whisper cries... I enjoy reading your poems... I included you on my poet list.... Your writing is special and very inspiring.

I really like this, you can really tell that there's raw emotion behind the words. Nice job :)

wow, very true about our children of the new generation..so many trouble dealing with drug and criminal committed by our youth or children these days. Good poem.

lovely...captures the plight of the children.

The cycle of life is that the childs screams grow to become the desperate whispers of adults, in the end I think the question becomes who hears anybody, but most importantly the young who still have a chance. Beautiful work Mr Walker its haunting.

It is a sad question. and a honest one. who will stand up and do something? We will never know. I myself would have been a better if someone had stepped in when given the chance. Keep up the good work.

thanks for inviting me, and congrats its a very good poem

good write nice poem

nice poem really really nice

wonderful writing with a deep meaning? who will help the children at night? ... who will help us when we`ll cry like children... i like you poem

A nice write, the future is always in our care in so many ways. So many are not cared for as your say and this is a crime that only diminishes the furture.

their cries, the nails in our coffins! great poem!

this is a good poem i like it alot

Strong sources and Individuals out there please join me and Dave to save those children

I liked it, its so touching to help the children out there.

Every verse cries with the abandoned, left on their own children... Thousands of lost souls are born every day, doomed to end their life in the dark... But these days not only kids get trapped. There are well developed ways of enslaving even adults... Thank you so much for sharing your hearfelt write...