Children Of Poverty Comments
Arrows of poverty darting from throes
Thorns of destitution germinating from thrones
Flood of orphans sprouting on ghettos of misery
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A realistic portrayal of the children born in poverty. Very impressive and extremely poignant. Thanks. Usurped future.... Infants of heedless justice praying with weep and cry Eradication of poverty is ridiculous mottoes of powers
An insightful depiction the plight of children living in fierce wretchedness, the deplorable condition of their lives; well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
This is a very sad, situation. Poverty is not good and I believe we can overcome it when we fight it together in unity.
Such a strong and powerful voice you are yelling here for razing the dreadful poverty! Many other readers will be awakened like me by the intensity of your yearning!
We should take a determined action to raze this FATAL pestilence of populace. Indeed we must. thank you Poet Mohammad, i like your careful choice of diction.
Thanks dear Onyango for your encouraging comment. As you said we must try our own best in this way.
A very heart-rending write saturated with empathy for the down-trodden. I greatly value your noble sentiments. But, don't you think, in the grand scheme of the Lord poverty should exist for charity and wealthiness to sustain. Inscrutable are the ways of the Lord. No mortal, with all the humanism in the world, can understand Him. What all we can do is to do whatever we can to help the poor so that we help and cleanse ourselves as good human beings. Helping the poor is thus self-help! (10)
Thanks dear Nair for your encouraging comment. I really appreciate you acclamation for my poem. I think moral values and virtuous qualities can survive even without devilish aspects, although it is within realm of contrasts that good features can be manifested and glorified. Without contradiction between virtue and sin there won't be any precious and excellent elements in nature of philanthropic aids, but still there are millions of people dying from poverty, malnutrition and lack of vital hygienic situations, they die of fatal disease without even have the chance of access to medical processes for their medical therapy. and no one of powerful and wealthy people even trouble themselves to help them as humanitarian help. people are so cruel in doling their wealth to people who desperately need it.
Dear, i accept the devilish phenomenon...we are born in this world with two sided chamber....dark (womb) and bright (birth to the world) , we go out, grown up and living together in the world with these elements...ying yang according to tao, or contrast according to artists...its not i am denying, but its about how we control which side we try to fight for....like the subject of perfection you mentioned in my poem its not about jealousy that provoked but its about perception and what people thought about something... we need to stand up for our opinion too, not necessary to accept all what people used to feed us with...back to this poem, yes we need to fight for people although it almost impossible, but we can do as humanity is living in our life, our world... It just we surrender or we fight for good...I pray to God, to keep children safe, they are the future that will shape what world will be after us.
Poverty is what kill human around the globe these days.. You remind me of Ellias when u writing about this..hmmm maybe you know him. To eradicate poverty is difficult and almost impossible that because as you said its because of human selfishness... And it is no way to cure it from people... Because everyone has different view... But im glad that you pointed this, at least you remind people and its us to play role as a big family, to gather to help and to live our life as best as we could here in this world, our house. Thanks Maleki
Thanks dear soul your writing has a sort of encouraging power and it is such an glorious and admirable privilege Sometimes you should accept existence of some devilish phenomenon because without evil there would not any meaning within virtue and its accepted morality. But sometimes the shadow of devil is too heavy and cast such an everlasting darkness over torso of virtue. It is exactly the appropriate time to fight with devil with all our power and versatilities. Thanks
dear Gajanan Mishra eradication of poverty is ridiculous because people are so self-important, they only seeking their own interest in any relationship. like a voracious wolf. we should enhance the sense of doling superfluous fascilities out to people who desperately need our help.But there are still some who are trying HARD and devote lots of energy and time to efface this fatal phenomenon from our planet.
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Thanks Tony