Thursday, October 1, 2009

Children Of Ghosts Comments

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Submarines sank
before his eyes
Disappeared into
murky depths
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Bob Bowers
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Ben Gieske 11 October 2009

A very vivid description of the horrors of war. You successful captured not only what happens in war but the terrible consequences of those left behind. 'Ghost' is a best choice of words to use to help realize the undesirable, lingering feelings of the survivors.

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