Sunday, April 20, 2014

Children In The Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet children, sweet children,
Where are you?
We are in the wash room brushing our teeth,
Aren't you too.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 24 September 2015

Sweet and beautiful...................................

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Walterrean Salley 03 November 2014

Children in their youth, preparing for their life's future. The loving support of parents is what they need the most. Enjoyed this very much.

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 November 2014

A beautiful melody, very sweet poem.

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Anand Brown 29 April 2014

Beautiful poem. I appreciate the rhyme scheme you employ throughout the poem. Engaging, evocative and well written.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 21 April 2014

a picture alluringly simple yet leaves a strong impact.

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