Monday, May 11, 2009

* Children * Comments

Rating: 3.6

Every pulse of life
That melts into a heart
Brings forth a love that's true,
A Child's new birth
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Joe Breunig 03 July 2012

An enjoyable piece; everyone needs love and needs to practice walking in God's Love towards one another; loved the message behind this poem; wonderfully conceived! -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2010

Dear Duncan, please listen! ! Amanda wrote to me telling that amanda wants to talk to you. and asked me to inform you.. thank you i am becoming a good samaritan. although i do not know both of you i am just conveying to you amandas request. thatnk u

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Nimal Dunuhinga 31 January 2010

Evergreen shrubs resemble the precious children.

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Alison Cassidy 02 January 2010

Duncan, what a timeless 'find' on this third day of 2010. CHILDREN is really a series of little poems, (like the Psalms or Proverbs in the Bible) , each verse, self-contained and worthy of inclusion in a book of 'inspirational thoughts'. I know I haven't made contact for a while and I am thrilled to see you are still gracing PoemHunter with your beautiful poetry and your compassionate approach to life and living - and of course children. Thanks for this exceptional poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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There is so much wisdom and joy in this sincere and heart melting poem Duncan. I feel every parent should read this beautiful piece. Perhaps it could be read out at a parent/teacher night or where parents are assembled together, because it can help our children as they become raised with love become the next generation...Top marks!

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Ernestine Northover 25 May 2009

Oh Duncan, that is gorgeous, what a beautiful write. Excellence. Words that go deep into the soul. A delightful poem to find. Blessings. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2009

beautiful poem really liked it its atenner from me cheers

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Andrew Blakemore 15 May 2009

The children are the future and they take their lead from their parents. If they were all raised as they should be then the world would surely be a better place. Wonderful write Duncan, a top drawer poem! Best wishes, Andrew

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 May 2009

The sun it shines forever For none can end the flame It lives in eyes of new born light For there it shall remain........................oh what a amazing verse, heart swells by new new lihgt yet to earth, man by the earthly living, joy yet radiates, ingenious write, yet passionate,10+++, thanks for sharing

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