Tuesday, January 1, 2008

Children Comments

Rating: 5.0

Children are the wind,
gone so soon,
but pleasant and lovely,
like the light of the moon.
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Rebekah Gamble
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Jim Norausky 31 December 2008

Very nice poem. The world would be a better place following your pen.

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Stephanie Saba 31 December 2008

I give it a 10! : ] I love this poem, it's true, written well, and just down right adorable.: ] keep writing, and God Bless. <3

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Gary Witt 11 June 2008

Ms. Gamble: Nicely done, especially the last stanza. Thank you for sharing this one. -G

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Rebekah Gamble

Rebekah Gamble

Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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