Friday, October 10, 2008

Children Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love's breath calling God's Spirit and joy
Eternal the seed that lights our eyes
Children of laughter, child of woe
Fragile their trust, Life's candle glows
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Roseann Shawiak 14 October 2014

I loved reading this poem, the rhythm can easily be turned into a song. It's very soothing. I love the lines: Children of laughter, child of woe Fragile their trust, Life's candle glows! ! So gently true. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Beautiful words.............

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Ron Flowers 10 June 2009

A lovely poem and a pleasure to read. A 10 from me. Ron

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C. P. Sharma 25 November 2008

Awesome song. You are a song-smith. Enjoyed the thoughts and the music of the words. CP

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John Tiong Chunghoo 20 November 2008

lorraine this poem reads like a prayer. keep on writing.

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Beautiful Wonderful Sweet and more!

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Duncan Wyllie 18 November 2008

Calm feeling to this, yet so uplifting * Love duncan X

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Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen 29 October 2008

children's laughter -the innocence

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Beautiful poem. Love with 10.

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Reshma Ramesh 24 October 2008

children........beautiful....well penned.......being a mother i can totally relate to it

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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 October 2008

sacred love emitting this poem. fine ryhm and rythm.......10+

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Aijaz Asif 12 October 2008

a very beautiful write...thanks 10

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