Thursday, October 13, 2011

Childlike Hands Comments

Rating: 2.0

your head upturned,
like a baby bird...

sunlight in the rain,
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Jacqui Broad 13 October 2011

I love poetry with somewhat of a riddle. I think this poem is about a young woman - baby bird, who worries about things she cannot change. I love the last two lines. This poem definitely touched a chord.

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Shadow Girl 13 October 2011

Interesting, intriguing..what more can i say. Complex in its simplicity. -SG

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